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[征文作品] 【2017文心雕龙—诱之心弦】【母亲与小姨的禁忌爱情】【47】（完）

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看到主角发现小姨和母亲的事后   基本可以预见猪脚双收的结果   能否出彩就要看作者本人的功底了  现在这样至少比一般的文章要强   至于能否提升个台阶就看作者能把姐妹两的心理活动凸显出来了
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